So my redo has him more actively building the snow penguin.
Does this work better? Feedback?
Sunday, March 8, 2009
Does this work better?
My final crit for our first project went well, overall. But one image needed to be fixed. Here is the original which the teacher said made the flamingo's neck look weird and not clear what he is doing:
So my redo has him more actively building the snow penguin.
Does this work better? Feedback?
So my redo has him more actively building the snow penguin.
Does this work better? Feedback?
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What a fun concept! I can tell what he's doing in the first one, but I do think the second is more clear... plus, it's more active, so that's always good.
yes, i like this too. i like all the action, especially the penguins. the flamingo is more clear in the redo. it also looks much better to have the scarf around the snow penguin instead of the flamingo. nice job!
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