Wednesday, November 19, 2008

Feeedback please


Good morning! I'm having trouble with this little boy's face. He's not "cute" yet. I'm not quite sure what to change.

-Should his mouth be open? Or not as wide?
-Teeth or no teeth?
-Should the bags under his eyes be removed?
-Dimples?

I feel like its close, but not yet there. Ideas?

-Lindsay

(12/3/08) Thanks for the feedback! Revised illo found HERE.

2 comments:

Nikki said...

I would get rid of the bags and try making his eyes a bit bigger...
You know, cute puppy eyes...

That might help you...

eleanor said...

yes, I agree. the bags make him look way older, so I would make his eyes a bit more wide-eyed.
otherwise, very cute!